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This response demonstrates a partial understanding of the texts. Although the first photo is rejected for two reasons, no crabs and no beach, the second is selected because ([it] includes the ghost crabs, the main topic of the essay; shows them 'just above the surf;' the delicate structure of the ghost crab is clearly seen). A brief fragment of interpretation is also given (because it is connected to the theme of how delicate life is).

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