HSA 2007 English Item 2

Students in an art appreciation class conducted research and wrote about different ways of creating art. Richard wrote an article about a Baltimore sculptor. The draft of Richard’s article requires revisions and edits. Read the draft. Then answer Numbers 2 through 6.

Students in an art appreciation class conducted research and wrote about different ways of creating art. Richard wrote an article about a Baltimore sculptor. The draft of Richard’s article, “A Spoon Reborn,” requires revisions and edits. Read the draft. Then answer the following:

Where should Richard move paragraph 4 (Sentences 12 and 13) in order to present his ideas in the most logical sequence?

1. between paragraphs 1 and 2
2. between paragraphs 2 and 3
3. after paragraph 5
4. Best as it is