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Brief Constructed Response Item for Grade 4

Standard 3.0 Comprehension of Literary Text

Topic A. Comprehension of Literary Text

Indicator 6. Determine important ideas and messages in literary texts

Objective a. Identify and explain main ideas and universal themes

Assessment limits:

  • Main ideas of the text or a portion of the text
  • Message, moral, or lesson learned from the text
Read "One Little Can" and answer the following question.

Something that is contagious spreads from one person to another.

Explain how something in this story becomes contagious. Use details from the story in your explanation. Write your answer in your answer book.


Sample Student Response #1

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Score for Sample Student Response #1: Rubric Score 3

Annotation, Using the Rubric: This response demonstrates an understanding of the complexities of the text. The student addresses the demands of the question by identifying two ways things were contagious in the story; "…once one person began throwing trash on the ground others thought it was ok," and then described how the clean up became contagious. The student effectively uses text information to clarify the explanation; "Once Rachel picked up that trash it began to change people. Now Lee picked his trash, Mrs. Polansky …decided that she should do that. Other people…thought that was right."


Sample Student Response #2

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Score for Sample Student Response #2: Rubric Score 2

Annotation, Using the Rubric: This response demonstrates a general understanding of the text. The student uses text-relevant information, relating how one event in the story leads to another event which shows "how something gets contagious."


Sample Student Response #3

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Score for Sample Student Response #3: Rubric Score 1

Annotation, Using the Rubric: This response demonstrates a minimal understanding of the text. The student minimally addresses the demands of the question by stating: "things can be contagious because once some one litters people start to litter more…." The student's use of minimal information shows some understanding of the text in relation to the question.


Sample Student Response #4

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Score for Sample Student Response #4: Rubric Score 0

Annotation, Using the Rubric: This response is irrelevant to the question. The student describes how Mrs. Polansky feels about Mr. Lee rather than focusing on what is contagious in the story.


Brief Constructed Response (BCR) Rubric

Print: Scoring Rubric

Score 3

The response demonstrates an understanding of the complexities of the text.

  • Addresses the demands of the question
  • Effectively uses text-relevant1 information to clarify or extend understanding

Score 2

The response demonstrates a general understanding of the text.

  • Partially addresses the demands of the question
  • Uses text-relevant1 information to show understanding

Score 1

The response demonstrates a minimal understanding of the text.

  • Minimally addresses the demands of the question
  • Uses minimal information to show some understanding of the text in relation to the question

Score 0

The response is completely incorrect, irrelevant to the question, or missing.2

Note 1:

Text-relevant: This information may or may not be an exact copy (quote) of the text but is clearly related to the text and often shows an analysis and/or interpretation of important ideas. Students may incorporate information to show connections to relevant prior experience as appropriate.

Note 2:

An exact copy (quote) or paraphrase of the question that provides no new relevant information will receive a score of "0".

Rubric Document Date: June 2003

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