Guidelines for Writing Extended Constructed Response Items | ||||||||||||||
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Sample Extended Constructed Response Items Core Learning Goal Indicator 1.1.1 The student will analyze historic documents to determine the basic principles of United States government and apply them to real-world situations. The Second Amendment to the United States Constitution states:
Comments: The directions in Step 2 were made more specific, and the reference to Sarah Brady was removed because it assumed students had certain prior knowledge. Students with the necessary knowledge and skills might be thrown off because they did not know Sarah Brady. The cartoon was moved to follow Step 3 because it was not needed until then. "Clauses" was changed to "phrases" so as not to confuse students with terminology. The name of the cartoonist and newspaper were removed from Step 3 because it added unnecessary reading. These items can be found at http://mdk12.org/assessments/high_school/developed/evolution_ss.html. REVISION: The Second Amendment to the United States Constitution states:
Core Learning Goal Indicator 1.1.2: The student will evaluate how the principles of government assist or impede the functioning of government. United States citizens vote indirectly for President through the Electoral College. The winning candidate in most states is awarded all of the votes for that state. The votes from all the states are then added up to elect the President.
Comments: The stimulus is not needed for the question; the stimulus is actually teaching the material. While, the first bullet relies on the over-used task of "Describe the advantages and disadvantages..." the second bullet can be answered with a "yes" or "no" and is really a restatement of the first bullet. Core Learning Goal Indicator 1.1.2 The student will evaluate how the principles of government assist or impede the functioning of government.
Comments: The verb 'describe' is repeated in two different bullets. The second bullet is not specific enough in how many Constitutional limits are required for a complete answer. Students responded with the same knowledge in answering the second bullet. The opportunities for powerful application are limited. ECRs are now required to have a stimulus. Core Learning Goal Indicator 1.2.2: The student will analyze legislation designed to protect the rights of individuals and groups and to promote equity in American society.
Comments: In general, the first bullet should contain a lower-level cognitive question/task, which this ECR does not have; moreover, the cognitive verb 'explain' is used three times in three different bullets. Finally, the content of this ECR is also too narrowly focused and based on historical developments. Core Learning Goal Indicator 1.2.5: The student will analyze elements, proceedings, and decisions related to criminal and civil law. Study the headlines below. Prosecutor Files Criminal Charges in Robbery Case Using the headlines:
Comments: This item is too narrowly focused for an ECR and the headlines do not really engage the students and stimulate them to write a powerful and insightful response. ECRs should represent larger conceptual ideas in Goal 1. The first bullet is worded such that it could be answered with "The prosecutor decided in was a criminal case." | ||||||||||||||